Thanks for using my music
(yes I made the underwater theme music for this!...)
Amazing...I love what you have done with the music!
Congrats on the 5th Place too!!
Check out my other tunes too!!
Unfortunatly Sprite tutorials are EVERYWHERE in newgrounds.
Many Steps - Meaning people where doing it in near real time
<Points to improve on>
The preloading text was unneccersairy - A memory dump for a flash movie? - No.
To much focus was on the picture of Shadow - Drew attention from the tutorial
Bad use of AS - Could of added a stopAllSounds(); on the music buttons themselves.
If you take note of the points ive made and take a few tutorials, there is no reason why I shouldnt be voting 5 for you next time!!
Any problems feel free to PM me.
The Preloader is for entertainment or rather humor. Nothing in there was real--it was just loading, get over that part.
I'm no expert in Action Script and just because you didn't like taking the time to click 1 extra button to turn it off is not my problem, nor my concern. In my last tutorial I had and off switch for each individual song--no one had a problem with it.
Its not my fault that you have an unstable attention span, and don't try to deny it, because if 1 picture can offset you, then there is no excuse. You could have complained about the music being distracting and I would have let that slide.
I've taken my fair share of tutorials, not alot of them were useful, thats why I made this one. Your review, although was well thought out and appreciated, just makes you look like a kill joy.
Don't expect perfect work, plenty of tutorials had a picture or effects inside. If you feel the need to bash on mine, then do so for the others.
There are Serious Flaws
Are you seriously going to update that file weekly, with weather reports?
If people want weather reports bud, I seriously doubt that they will use this flash movie to find it!
Second of all, the tutorial was VERY basic, There are tutorials all around Newgrounds with that info & more in them.
To do well on Newgrounds you need TO BE ORIGINAL - This is a prime example of something that has been done before.
Im sorry for being so harsh BUT if you take some tutorials yourself, there is no reason why you cant do well!
PM me if you have any questions.
I think you need to take a tutorial in how to draw people.
How many people do you see with a sideways nose, grissing thier teeth in a perfect oval?
Some bugs but a Good game
This game is no way original. - This isnt necessarily a bad point however!
But my immediate concern is that sometimes the droplet is nowhere near a wall/spike/electric fence/what ever but is still killed. This bug could be caused by the Action script or because of the movieclip of either the droplet or the wall causing problems.
It was the only flaw to an otherwise, good game. I thought the gravity was realistic as I have played games in which if you tap the left arrow the object flies to the left at amazing pace.
Congratulations for passing the portal
The hitTests were as accurate as I could get them - if I ever tried to make them true x, y or to tighten them it really messed everything up. But just try to ignore it =)
An Ok game
Not an original idea however some aspects were good.
The graphics were good but could of been a tad better (think maybe glass effects on tiles a bit more?)
The sounds wernt so great, a bit too alike. I would have faster music for harder levels etc. - Sorry i wont get into the psycology of games but maybe an idea for the future?
To sumarise: A good game but still room for alot of improvement. 6/10
An Excellent Game
An excellent game, worthy of 9/10 and a big fat 5.
The graphics were good however the game wasnt original BUT there were new things and an editior.
More Please :)
Finally MCM on the portal!
Just for using mad capsule markets u get 5 BUT
I have to write a decent review as well!
It was a good game...very addictive...(espically loved the rage!)
The sound (being Mad Caps) was EXCELLENT (loving Cistm Konfliqt! and 020120)
Loved the idea of use own music and totally love the way you could have a goose type thing on ur players head.
nice work! Funkyjunky
Thanks for the review!
I'm surprised so many people know MCM, not many people know them here in the UK. 010 is my fave album, I like Cistm Konfliqt & OSC-DIS too. Not heard 020120, I'll get it soon.
I almost took the bird hat away, but I thought what the hell so I just left it in. Its from the 'How to draw birds' tutorial here on Newgrounds.
Thanks for the 10 :)
It was ok
My friend PLEASE sort out that preloaders colour.
It might look good too you but its an insult to the colour mixer panel.
Other than the colours i think youve done well and i will give u a good 4 outa 5
Thanks,yes I know the preloaders ugly i wasnt really good with colors back then i might get around to changing it,im busy with other things and making a new tutorial so be sure to check that out.;)
That was COOL
Infact thats my favourite game ive played today!
David Firth is a bit of a legend
You did him justice
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