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Unoriginal

Unfortunatly Sprite tutorials are EVERYWHERE in newgrounds.
<Good Points>
Many Steps - Meaning people where doing it in near real time

<Points to improve on>
The preloading text was unneccersairy - A memory dump for a flash movie? - No.
To much focus was on the picture of Shadow - Drew attention from the tutorial
Bad use of AS - Could of added a stopAllSounds(); on the music buttons themselves.

<conclusion>

If you take note of the points ive made and take a few tutorials, there is no reason why I shouldnt be voting 5 for you next time!!
Good luck!
Any problems feel free to PM me.
Funkyjunky

knuxrouge responds:

The Preloader is for entertainment or rather humor. Nothing in there was real--it was just loading, get over that part.
I'm no expert in Action Script and just because you didn't like taking the time to click 1 extra button to turn it off is not my problem, nor my concern. In my last tutorial I had and off switch for each individual song--no one had a problem with it.
Its not my fault that you have an unstable attention span, and don't try to deny it, because if 1 picture can offset you, then there is no excuse. You could have complained about the music being distracting and I would have let that slide.

I've taken my fair share of tutorials, not alot of them were useful, thats why I made this one. Your review, although was well thought out and appreciated, just makes you look like a kill joy.
Don't expect perfect work, plenty of tutorials had a picture or effects inside. If you feel the need to bash on mine, then do so for the others.

Some bugs but a Good game

This game is no way original. - This isnt necessarily a bad point however!
But my immediate concern is that sometimes the droplet is nowhere near a wall/spike/electric fence/what ever but is still killed. This bug could be caused by the Action script or because of the movieclip of either the droplet or the wall causing problems.

It was the only flaw to an otherwise, good game. I thought the gravity was realistic as I have played games in which if you tap the left arrow the object flies to the left at amazing pace.

Congratulations for passing the portal

Ed George

Cherban responds:

The hitTests were as accurate as I could get them - if I ever tried to make them true x, y or to tighten them it really messed everything up. But just try to ignore it =)

Finally MCM on the portal!

Just for using mad capsule markets u get 5 BUT

I have to write a decent review as well!

It was a good game...very addictive...(espically loved the rage!)
The sound (being Mad Caps) was EXCELLENT (loving Cistm Konfliqt! and 020120)

Loved the idea of use own music and totally love the way you could have a goose type thing on ur players head.

10/10

nice work! Funkyjunky

ChromeShark responds:

Thanks for the review!

I'm surprised so many people know MCM, not many people know them here in the UK. 010 is my fave album, I like Cistm Konfliqt & OSC-DIS too. Not heard 020120, I'll get it soon.

I almost took the bird hat away, but I thought what the hell so I just left it in. Its from the 'How to draw birds' tutorial here on Newgrounds.

Thanks for the 10 :)

It was ok

My friend PLEASE sort out that preloaders colour.

It might look good too you but its an insult to the colour mixer panel.

Other than the colours i think youve done well and i will give u a good 4 outa 5

ed

Funbumb responds:

Thanks,yes I know the preloaders ugly i wasnt really good with colors back then i might get around to changing it,im busy with other things and making a new tutorial so be sure to check that out.;)

Nothing new...

Yeah...helped a wee bit...but dude its been done

nice try though

Good luck in the future...ed

DrWhat responds:

Thanks

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