That was excellent.
Well animated, good song and hilarious.
Generation 1 is completed!
And with Iron Maiden as the music....cor if I could give you 20/10 I would.
Good Show Old Chap.
As much as I HATE spam here on newgrounds. For some reason I adore your subbmissions?
It annoys me that a certain artist (I wont name names) CALLED VICEMAN is ripping you off currently.
See you tomorrow with Moltres!
Thanks for using my music
(yes I made the underwater theme music for this!...)
Amazing...I love what you have done with the music!
Congrats on the 5th Place too!!
Check out my other tunes too!!
Unfortunatly Sprite tutorials are EVERYWHERE in newgrounds.
Many Steps - Meaning people where doing it in near real time
<Points to improve on>
The preloading text was unneccersairy - A memory dump for a flash movie? - No.
To much focus was on the picture of Shadow - Drew attention from the tutorial
Bad use of AS - Could of added a stopAllSounds(); on the music buttons themselves.
If you take note of the points ive made and take a few tutorials, there is no reason why I shouldnt be voting 5 for you next time!!
Any problems feel free to PM me.
The Preloader is for entertainment or rather humor. Nothing in there was real--it was just loading, get over that part.
I'm no expert in Action Script and just because you didn't like taking the time to click 1 extra button to turn it off is not my problem, nor my concern. In my last tutorial I had and off switch for each individual song--no one had a problem with it.
Its not my fault that you have an unstable attention span, and don't try to deny it, because if 1 picture can offset you, then there is no excuse. You could have complained about the music being distracting and I would have let that slide.
I've taken my fair share of tutorials, not alot of them were useful, thats why I made this one. Your review, although was well thought out and appreciated, just makes you look like a kill joy.
Don't expect perfect work, plenty of tutorials had a picture or effects inside. If you feel the need to bash on mine, then do so for the others.
There are Serious Flaws
Are you seriously going to update that file weekly, with weather reports?
If people want weather reports bud, I seriously doubt that they will use this flash movie to find it!
Second of all, the tutorial was VERY basic, There are tutorials all around Newgrounds with that info & more in them.
To do well on Newgrounds you need TO BE ORIGINAL - This is a prime example of something that has been done before.
Im sorry for being so harsh BUT if you take some tutorials yourself, there is no reason why you cant do well!
PM me if you have any questions.
As Much as it hurts me
I prefer this to my remixes of it!
I like this alot, The start sounds like the work of Henry Homesweet, a chiptune artist i Like. So kudos for that!
Im all for using this for a future submission!
thanks for the comment, im glad that u liked, sure if u have use for it, well then... go for it lol.. but make it good. :-)
Very nice, I love the synth. I actually want to use that in my next song (in the making!)
However my only critism is that I dont think it loops too well, that however is debatable.
Good track. 4/5
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